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Blossom, blossom,
fall to the ground
sing, my brothers, dance around
this single fallen flower bud
its poor weak leaves
all bruised with mud
and tell us stories
that which we seek
be we rich or poor,
strong or weak
but let us not forget ourselves
for the earth shall make us meek
and nothing is more impossible
than a god among the teak
©2008-2009 ~allthatwander
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yeah!!! :) :clap:

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“I am not afraid…I was born to do this.” - Joan of Arc
\"I cannot live without books.\" -Thomas Jefferson
\"Some people win wars, some people win hearts, I win radio contests.\"-My friend Max
You are very welcome, Anne.

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Anne?

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"Imagination is more important than knowledge" Albert Einstein
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Anne. yes, since you lot are smarter than I am and don't post your names online, and I'm sick of using those [insert name here because you don't want people to know who you are] messages, I'm calling you people by the names of the characters you are based on. "Desiree."

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Gasp. It's here!! :hug: You write well. So kudos for that, because I'm having a major writer's block right now. :cry:

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"The only real death is a life lived meaninglessly."
- The Intelligent Homosexual's Guide to Capitalism and Socialism with a Key to the Scriptures
<.< >.> Sounds good. =D

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"Imagination is more important than knowledge" Albert Einstein
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Thanks, I know how much writers block sucks.

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mmkay

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I just love this. I like your writing style, and this poem is just, well, awesome :)

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~Sorrow rebuild me as I step out of the light
Misery strengthen me as I say my goodbyes
I heal my wounds with grief
And dream of you
And weep myself alive~

~better to ask forgiveness than permission~

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